I very much hope you enjoy using our class blog and find it to be beneficial in your preparations for the H.S.C.
Mr. Bosco
Tuesday, January 27, 2009
Welcome Year 11
Welcome Year 11 SOR 1-Unit to your blog. This is your space to submit and discuss thoughts, homework and notes. I have set it up for you to use as a resource and as an on-line community for our class.
I very much hope you enjoy using our class blog and find it to be beneficial in your preparations for the H.S.C.
I very much hope you enjoy using our class blog and find it to be beneficial in your preparations for the H.S.C.
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Reno Lombardo
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Target audience = children
One day there were two little boys that went shopping with there parents. They went shopping because is was that time of year again were you for thing that u need for the coming school year. There parents said first stop is at McDonalds for some lunch so the kid got a nugget happy meal , so after they had finished lunch they went off to Kmart to find her son a lunch box. So they went In to Kmart and they couldn’t find were the penicil case were located in the Kmart store so the mums finale found the penicil cases and said to her son say her and go fined your self I nice penicil case for your self while I go find some clothes for my self I will be only ten minutes
I wont be very long she said to her son, don’t do anything Silly while I’m
gone. When his mum left he looked at his watch and said mum should be back at half past ten .then this other boy came up to him and said to him that is my lunch box my mum is going to buy it for me .no she is not my mum is going to buy it for me so both of the boys started a big fight in Kmart there was punches big thrown kick and a lot of other stuff going on they even start to run around the shop and the ran straight past there mothers one of the kids mother got her son gave him a clip around the ears and said to him you are being punished when we go home so she take his TV , psp, and ds off him he was not aloud to play with the things for one mouth for doing that bad deed.
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ReplyDeleteChris Eid
11Edwin
Target audience- children from the age of 7-12
One day in a small town not far from California Jack and his friends would always play in the park not far from his house. Jack was a 10 year old boy who loved playing games and having fun just like kids do.
In the diminutive town where jack and his parents lived in, the local district contained little people. It was an exceptionally poor one; it was an appalling neighbourhood filled with hatred crime. Jack wasn’t doing so well at school so he found it hard to concentrate, and began to feel the pressure.
To make matters worst, he came home one day and found that his friend next door was moving into state and that somebody else was moving in. He was furious with his friends and family, and just wanted to be left alone. He began to hang around the wrong people at school and was not obeying the law.
His old friend’s house had just sold and the new people moved straight in and began to continue with their lives. Two days later Jack realised his new neighbours were not at home so Jack decided that he would jump the fence and break into the house. But he needed to do this when his mother was not at home, so every Thursdays she would attend bowling and come home very late, while in the mean time Jack would have to stay at home with his babysitter Nancy.
As his mother left for bowling she told Jack to “behave himself, and be nice to Nancy”. When his mother left, Jack snuck out of the house and broke into the next door neighbours and took some belongings. He would then give there belonging to his mother as a gift, but his mother didn’t no where Jack was acquiring these items. So when the next Thursday came around Jack thought he would do it again, so before his mother left she told him the exact same thing to “behave himself, and be nice to Nancy”, but Jack was very naïve and his mother new that Jack would sneak out, so she wait, and didn’t bother attend bowling. As a few hours passed she caught him in the act of stealing and punished him by grounding him for a month. He had to return all the stole goods and apologised. Jack will never forget the day his mother told him “Always behave as if your mother were watching.”
An excellent story, Chris. You've drawn appropriate characters and integrated some good dialogue. But, be aware that the phenomenon is known as "hate crime" not "hatred crime".
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